Some of their work:
The email I kindly recieved back:
"Hi Heather
Thanks for sending this through, always interesting to see students' work.
09/10 planner – good handling of lots of information, I like the way that you have used pictograms to suggest holidays and combined them with the numerals to save space.
The Feel Good drinks campaign is a nice concept and your visuals work really well too.
I think the Breakfast Drink project has the potential for a better way of linking the ideas of 'breakfast' and 'drink' (even if it's just a different way of styling the 'r'), although it would be great to keep it as simple as you have done.
The TF logo works well typographically, perhaps there's something you can add to suggest what they do a bit more and make it really unique.
Hope this helps and that you don't mind my critique, (feel free to ignore if you don't agree!)
As a 2nd year student I think you're on definitely on the right track, we'll look forward to hearing from you when you graduate.
Best wishes
Victoria
Victoria Walmsley ⁄ Designer"
I'm really happy with the feedback. The breakfast drinks is something that I already knew about, but I am going to change this now.
Now that I've got a starting point of conversation, I may ask if I can go and visit for a day or so. My only concern at the moment is the fact that it's in London, and I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to get there.
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